A narrative mess with very little romantic heat, the novel suffers. Too many plots (the community service thread lasts only for about a third of the book and is replaced by others) complicate things and make the story meander and stray. I grew impatient for the story to resolve.
The co-stars range from the mildly amusing would-be suitor of Julie to her entirely obnoxious and toxic brother Tyler, but none really perform valuable service. Instead, the story rests on the suitably interesting protagonists. Unfortunately, there isn't much to their romance as most of it is off-the-page and lacking in drama.

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