Sunday, August 30, 2020
The Mozart Girl, by Barbara Nickel
Saturday, August 29, 2020
Don't Read the Comments, by Eric Smith
The other half of the story is Aaron, who writes scripts for games and is part of a team that is on the verge of their first release. He dreams of making it big and getting rich, but he can't even get the person running the project to pay him. His mother, suspicious that he's being taken advantage of, discourages from spending his time writing. Aaron, to escape from it all, plays on Reclaim the Sun, where he happens to stumble across Divya. And in the midst of their two troubles, they find a common bond in their gaming.
Smith has a lot of knowledge about online gaming, using the jargon and understanding the dynamics of multi-player games in a way that shows that he's a fan. I'm an outsider, so I'll defer to someone else about how authentic the story is, but nothing glaring shouts out.
I can speak more confidently about the storytelling. Of the two main plot lines, Divya's is really the more interesting and meaningful. Aaron, who struggles with standing up for himself and winning the respect of his parents is in familiar (and boring) YA territory. Any spark of romance between Aaron and Divya is undeveloped and not terribly interesting, so we can nix the romantic angle. That leaves us with Divya facing off against the misogyny in the gaming community, which I found interesting,having heard a little about this in the news. The rest felt distracting.
We certainly could have used less distraction, because as entertaining as this book is, so much of the story never really gels. Consider the long list of ideas that get introduced and just sit out there like unexplored worlds: Divya's fan club, her relationship with her BFF Rebekah, Rebekah's own troubles with men, Divya's relationship with her mother (and that doesn't even get us near any of Aaron's more numerous loose ends). It is a sloppy story, but that won't distract you from enjoying it, because even a poorly plotted story can be successful with some pretty things to watch and a lot of well-paced action -- sort of like playing a couple rounds of games.
Monday, August 24, 2020
Every Reason We Shouldn't, by Sara Fujimura
Then a young speedskater named Jonah shows up. He and his family have relocated to Phoenix and he needs a place to practice for his Olympic bid. He brings much-needed money to pay for his rink time, but he also reignites Olivia's interest in skating. Chemistry builds between them, but their dreams are leading them in different directions. Meanwhile, Olivia's mother is taking a turn for the worse and she needs expensive medical treatment that they cannot afford, unless they sell the rink, leaving Olivia without her home base.
A satisfactory romance and athletic adventure, but the storytelling slips off the rails too often for my tastes with muddled endings and incomplete idea. Some of the key plot points that never quite get finished explored include Olivia's biracial background and the possibility of Olivia and Jonah skating together. These are not casually mentioned ideas. They are actually built up steadily through the story, but then get tossed aside and forgotten. Climactic moments in this book tend to be confusing to track (I did a lot of re-reading). Action just isn't Fujimura's strength. That's a problem. No matter how good the characters are, if the story doesn't deliver, they are basically orphaned, and that is what happened here.
Saturday, August 22, 2020
Furious Thing, by Jenny Downham
But then the veneer starts to crack and the reasons for Lexi's seemingly inexplicable behavior become -- shockingly -- clear. Her family is deliriously dysfunctional. Her mother is obsessed with pleasing her fiancee, a man who turns out to be a cruelly abusive control freak. He gaslights the entire family and drives away anyone who has the strength to leave (including her first wife and his son). For those who don't have the strength like her mother and her half-sister, Lexi stays around to defend them by "becoming the monster"-- turning violent as a way of redirecting his abuse towards her.
Lexi gets described midway through the book as a "survivor," but she's much more than that: a total badass, proto-mama bear, and general monster. Lexi would describe life as a fairy tale, but she would mean that is the sense that it is a story in which you stuff witches in ovens and burn them alive. She's a tough and brave character, but she's also achingly weak and lonely. Ultimately, she's inspirational, working her way from victimhood to angry rage to choosing to cultivate love instead of hate. And finally, to finding her voice and understanding that love isn't something we earn. It's something we simply deserve. Because the writing is so good, I'll try tempting you to do so the same by giving away that things sort of work out in the end, so you can at least see Lexi pull herself out of her trap. But you won't come out feeling that good about grownups.
Unpleasant characters and a gripping story line make this a novel you hate reading but don't quite manage to put down (unless you're strong enough to just walk away). I'm not that strong, so I was there to the bitter end. This is an angry book (written by an author who wants us to be angry as well). If you like a book to really piss you off, then this is an excellent read.
Wednesday, August 19, 2020
What I Carry, by Jennifer Longo
Being free is a mixed blessing. She'll also be without support and without a distinct plan. But that's OK. She'll figure out a way to manage -- she always has.
Aging out gracefully and starting anew, however, is thrown awry in her final placement. She's been sent to an island and placed with a woman who is herself about to retire from fostering kids. Muir, who has tried so hard to form no connections, finds herself drawing closer to her foster mother, forming bonds with two kids (Kira and Sean), and even becoming attached to the family dog. No matter what Muir may intend, it would seem that one cannot always travel light.
A pleasing story about foster care that hits all the right notes. Longo has made some effort to avoid the usual tropes about violence and sexual abuse stories in foster care, and instead pulled up lots of unique anecdotes from foster children she's interviewed. It gives Muir an intriguing backstory to share through the novel. The ending is intentionally very happy (although leave it to Muir to try to sabotage it all the way up to the end) but avoids getting too weepy, retaining a modicum of authenticity and faithfulness to the characters. That's challenging and the only real blemish on the story is a degree of repetitiveness that sets in as Longo struggles to get everything right.
Sunday, August 16, 2020
Full Disclosure, by Camryn Garrett
Garrett's debut novel shows a writer of great promise. Simone is a complex protagonist: a mixed-race bi-curious young woman who is open about her feelings and her needs. Her relationship with her two dads is something of a revelation in its closeness and mutual respect. And pretty much all of the characters in this diverse and richly drawn story are interesting and unique. Unfortunately, the story has serious execution problems: from its clunky extortion plot to its lack of focus on its own plot points, this can be a maddening read. Really interesting characters stumbling through a poorly developed script makes me hope for better on her next outing (and leaves me looking forward to checking out that novel).
Friday, August 14, 2020
I Know You Remember, by Jennifer Donaldson
Now, Ruthie's mother has died and Ruthie is returning to Anchorage. She can't wait to catch up with her old friend. But when she gets back, she finds out that Zahra has gone missing. A few nights before, at a party where Zahra and her boyfriend Ben had a big blow-out fight, was the last time anyone's seen Zahra. Like everyone else, Ruthie is eager to find her friend and she dives into the search effort. But as Ruthie gets to know Zahra's new friends, she finds a lot has changed in the past three years and that maybe she doesn't know her old friend all that well anymore.
The review I thought I was going to write when I was reading this book was overshadowed by a large twist in the last forty pages of the book, when the story switches narrators and point of view. Obviously, I don't want to spoil the ending, but it's quite jarring and a lot of the story that is built up gets tossed aside and abandoned. Not just stories, but entire characters are discarded as the entire purpose of the story is re-formulated in front of our eyes. I have done a bit of soul searching about this, thinking about whether I missed clues or foreshadowing, but there really isn't much to justify the shift. It's jarring and it feels artificial -- a gimmick to startle the reader.
If we back up and consider the story up to the moment of the twist, this is fairly by-the-numbers stuff. Ruthie's journey of discovery as she comes to understand the changes that Zahra has gone through and her fleeting romance with Zahra's ex-boyfriend create a decent character. The setting in Anchorage is nicely atmospheric and the action unfolds at a decent pace. It's a decent but unremarkable story. But again, that very late plot twist mangles most of that set-up, leaving us with a new story that felt like it involved entirely different characters and seemingly unrelated motives. Startling, but it didn't work for me at all.
Monday, August 10, 2020
Yes No Maybe So, by Becky Albertalli & Aisha Saeed
Through a summer of working on the campaign, Jamie and Maya discover a lot about the world. Maya quickly finds that this campaign is about bigger issues than simply her guy winning. The legislature is considering a ban on head coverings, which she sees as a blatant attempt to discriminate against Muslims. As a Jew, Jamie imagines that he understands what it is like to experience prejudice but as they engage in politics, he finds out how little he has experienced to date.
While the book addresses a number of key topics about contemporary elections (the role of social media, public polling, the purpose of focused convassing, and acts of dog whistling and of gaslighting), this is a surprisingly superficial story. Conversations occasionally turn to racism and cancel culture, but the authors make almost everyone sympathetic and shy away from deep discussions. A farcical anti-semitic attack sends confusing messages. The overall tone is light and the book seems more targeted towards middle schoolers. That proves disappointing for a book so centrally focused on politics. I get that the agenda is to stir some interest in contemporary politics, but the book is too superficial to achieve much.
Sunday, August 09, 2020
All the Stars and Teeth, by Adalyn Grace
When you have reviewed close to 2000 books, it becomes harder and harder to find a book that feels truly novel. And in few subgenres (beyond summer beach romance) is the repetitive and formulaic found more often than fantasy. Swords, magic, monsters, and teen angst -- it's been done again and again. Yet it entertains and when you want to just sit back and relax, it's great choice of subject matter. No great surprises, just bloodthirsty action and mayhem. So, imagine my surprise when I read this startling original debut fantasy adventure from author Adalyne Grace!
Amora is the princess of Visidia, a kingdom made up of seven islands. Each island practices its own type of magic (levitation, shape shifting, healing, earth moving, time enhancing, and "curse"). Each person can practice only one type of magic. To attempt to master more than one is the path to madness and forbidden. And ruling over them all is the magic of the Visidian royal family -- soul magic. Heir to the throne, Amora must master the family's monopoly -- the ability to destroy a human from within by crushing their soul -- to prove herself worthy of her title. And when she fails her test, not only her legitimacy, but her life as well becomes forfeit. To her rescue comes a young pirate Bastian who helps her escape. Her doggedly loyal fiance Ferrick follows along and proves his value through healing. With time, they also pick up a mermaid named Vataea as a guide.
The stakes are higher than Amora's challenges in mastering her magic. The entire kingdom (and the core principles that support it) are under challenge. There is a rebellion afoot and the kingdom is under siege. It is also under challenge from within. Amora and her compatriots must confront an ancient curse that lays bare the corruption of their entire society and find a way to rebuild it.
There are plenty of familiar fantasy tropes in the bare story, but the directions that each one goes in will leave you surprised. Even the obvious final showdown between Amora and the leader of the evil forces doesn't quite unfold according to plan. And the defeat of the bad guys is in fact never truly confirmed in this enlightened 21st century take on the battle of good and evil.
That's where the story starts getting really interesting. There's an obvious romantic triangle at play here (Amora, Bastian, and Ferrick), but it doesn't play out as one would imagine. Magic interferes with free will and the characters don't quite cooperate with the usual unfolding of a fantasy romance. Sure, there's some great passionate scenes in the story, but these characters are wiser than that. Amora, while she is fully capable of lust, is not throwing herself at either of these boys. She has more important business at hand that picking up a prince. It goes almost without saying that this a realm of unremarkable gender equality where men and women are equally capable fighters.
That's really just the beginning of Grace's social and political critique. While there's no mention of American politics, it isn't hard to see the agenda and the striking critique of the story. This is a fantasy novel for Trumpian America, from a king who knows no moral boundaries to holding on to power to an inner circle who struggle to maintain the status quo for the benefits they reap from it. The gradual unveiling of the sheer scope of the degradation (through the concept of "soul magic" and the way it both empowers and corrupts) couldn't be a clearer parable to modern party politics. This is a deliciously subversive book.
Finally, this is a great story. Amora has a highly satisfactory dramatic arc, from callow, selfish, and materialistic, to ultimately self-sacrificing leader as a young woman who comes to understand the sacrifices one must make to earn the trust of her people and the wisdom necessary to rule. Highly recommended.
Sunday, August 02, 2020
Dark and Deepest Red, by Anne-Marie McLemore
It's a strange story, often difficult to follow, but beautifully written. In general McLemore and their books are this way: thick and meaty prose combined with strange magic and deep meaning. It makes for slow reading and a great deal of effort. In this case, I'm not so sure that they succeeded as much as they had hoped.
The story intends to combine a real historical event from the summer of 1518, when a large number of women were indeed afflicted with an uncontrollable urge to dance, with Han Christian Anderson's "The Red Shoes." It's clever but the author assumes the reader will make connections and be as obsessed. You can see McLemore's excitement, but it's hard not to feel left behind. In addition, attempts to work in themes about gender identity and sexual agency, while well-intentioned, felt forced and like an attempt to give a pretty and clever fairy tale some last minute gravitas. Overall, I found the novel to be a collection of ideas that never really gels.
Saturday, August 01, 2020
Busted, by Gina Ciocca
It's a dizzying complex story that leaves you pretty much guessing until the end. That's the good part. What I liked less was how hard it was to follow. It's not a bad story but it's a story poorly told. The characters lack much personality, making them melt together and leaving me flipping back and reminding myself who was who. I'm still undecided if the complexity was necessary, but it was certainly a barrier that made the book more work than fun.
Thursday, July 30, 2020
Be Not Far From Me, by Mindy McGinnis
I found the circumstances of her predicament utterly implausible. Childish jealousy drives her into the deep woods without any shoes and she manages -- without footwear and utterly intoxicated -- to wander so far away that in spite of being a trained woodsman she can't find her way back. She subsequently manages to stumble from Tennessee to Georgia on foot for fifteen days without running across any sign of human (no roads, trails, cabins, powerlines, etc.).
If you accept those strained premises for an adventure, you get an unusually gritty and intense adventure. If things like that are to your taste then read away. I personally don't know if scenes of self-amputation are my cup of tea, but don't let me stop you if you need that in your life. I admired Ashley's tough and complex personality, but she's not the type of character who is going to let you get too close. Authentic but the result was no one I really wanted to get to know. Well-written, but not a story I was ultimately drawn to.
Sunday, July 26, 2020
The How & the Why, by Cynthia Hand
This fairly long novel also includes largely unrelated stories of Cass's attempt to get into the college of her dreams, her adoptive mother's search for a replacement heart as her own is failing, and some interpersonal issues with her best friend (also adopted) and a new boy at school. These fit in, but largely don't add much to the story beyond feeding a very surprising (and slightly contrived) ending that pulls hearts strings but stretches credulity like a Bollywood romance.
There are plenty of novels out there about adoption and the vast majority of them split timelines to try to draw parallels between the lives of mother and daughter. I think this one is more successful for not overdoing the parallels and for respectfully avoiding a forced reunion. Also, never wavering from the conviction that adoptive parents are "real" parents seems truer to the experience and respectful to people who have been adopted. Finally, while I found the subplots peripheral and largely extraneous, I enjoyed them as well.
Friday, July 24, 2020
The Speed of Falling Objects, by Nancy Richardson Fischer
The trip ends up being more than anyone counts on when the plane they are flying into the jungle goes down in bad weather. Lost in the rain forest, Danny, Gus, Danny's father, and a few additional survivors have to make their way back to civilization. The jungle is full of dangers and the members of the party are gradually taken out one by one. For Danny, it is possibly the last chance she will have to figure her father out, figure out how they became estranged, and discover who she really is -- a quest nearly as difficult as the physical challenge of survival.
Edge of the seat action moves this story briskly along, but it is the emotional journey that Danny goes through that ultimately makes this not only entertaining but fulfilling. It's certainly not for the squeamish as there is stuff here to make just about anyone's stomach churn, but it is not overdone and the adventure feels real. The obvious romantic angle between Danny and Gus hangs over this plot like a poisonous snake, but is mostly deflected. Ultimately, the satisfaction of seeing Danny come to terms with the limitations of her parents and the recognition of her own weaknesses and strengths makes this novel enjoyable and worth reading.
Sunday, July 19, 2020
When the Stars Lead to You, by Ronni Davis
But some things have changed. Ashton is fighting serious inner demons and Devon risks being swept away by his battle with depression. And while family and friends on both sides try to intervene, in the end it comes down to Devon herself to make things right.
This is probably a book best avoided if you like your characters to behave rationally, because as much as one can understand the temptations that Devon is dealing with, her choice of a first love is pretty poor. Never mind his clinical depression, this boy is manipulative and controlling. He's really bad news. As book smart and well-adjusted as Devon is, it's painful to watch her going down a rabbit hole for hormones and romantic fantasy. But it's also painfully realistic and as much as we would all insist it would never happen, we all have either been there or know someone who has. In sum, uncomfortable reading and, if that is your idea of a good romance, pretty intoxicating stuff!
Friday, July 17, 2020
Rules for Being a Girl, by Candace Bushnell and Katie Cotugno
At first, both of them try to ignore the incident, but as he starts retaliating against her in class, she decides in the end to make a public complaint. The results are devastating as the school administration circles the wagons, the student body turns against her, and suddenly her future looks to be in jeopardy. But refusing to step down, Marin fights for her dreams and her future, taking on the school and its entrenched prejudices.
Being a well-manufactured product of Allow Entertainment, this is slick storytelling and the story and its resolution is superbly satisfying. Surprisingly, it is also a disjointed mess in a way that only writing-by-committee can achieve. There's a second theme to the novel -- Marin's awakening as a feminist -- demonstrated through her founding of a feminist book club at school with the help of another sympathetic teacher. This would seem like a good complement to the #metoo story, as a bunch of highschoolers discover Audre Lorde and achieve enlightenment, but instead it breaks down into long discussions about POCs and other tensions between liberal and radical feminism that the average reader is going to glaze over. It never ends up having relevance to the story. And as for the eponymous rules, while they are striking and make a great back cover, they aren't really more than a tease, fitting into neither thread.
Monday, July 13, 2020
Scars Like Wings, by Erin Stewart
With a face that is heavily disfigured and a body covered with grafts, she is most people's worst nightmare and Ava finds it hard to imagine being back in high school. But with some support from another burn victim (the vivacious and over-the-top Piper) and Piper's friend Asad, Ava discovers that there is a life worth living. It's hardly a smooth journey though. Bullies and misunderstandings aside, both Ava and Piper have to learn that their worst enemy is themselves.
A satisfying and well-written story of overcoming adversity. What the story lacks in novelty or surprise it makes up for with strong and interesting characters and its two protagonists in particular. The complicated dynamic between the two girls and their run-ins with their shared nemesis mean-girl Kenzie provides a good pay-off. Asad, the helpless (and mildly hopeless) love interest and Ava's aunt and uncle are more disposable, but move the story forward. Overall, some trimming down would have helped but the book never truly drags and remains entertaining throughout.
Sunday, July 12, 2020
The Arrival of Someday, by Jen Malone
Eighteen year-old Amelia has a rare liver condition, but she's learned how to make a good life by not letting it define her existence. Active on local roller derby circuit in Cambridge, ready to start at UMass Amherst in the fall, and making a mark for herself as an artist, hardly anyone knows what she's dealing with because she ignores the disease (and the condition itself stays conveniently in remission). So, when she finds herself in the middle of a roller derby match coughing up blood on the floor, everyone is taken by surprise.
Her condition has turned for the worse and it has become imperative for her to receive a liver transplant. There are plenty of tests at the hospital, good days and bad days, and struggles as she finds herself sometimes unable to do the things she used to do. But Amelia has always been a fighter. Just as she demolishes her opponents on the skate track, she goes after her disease with gusto. The last thing she wants is for people to treat her as "the dying girl." But as her condition worsens, she has to come to terms with the way that her health doesn't just affect her. It also involves her friends and her family, finding its way into all of her social interactions and eventually into her own mental health. Is she really as fearless as she's always imagined? Or is her bravery simply false bravado?
In sum, a sensitive and nuanced portrayal of a young woman dealing with an extraordinary health challenge. That, in itself, is nothing notable, but this work stands out for the time it spends on Amelia's family and friends. Amelia's entire family is in this together and the way that this is portrayed is both realistic and makes the story more compelling. One could draw fault with the messy ending and the sheer number of loose ends that Malone leaves us with, but I was impressed with the complexity of the human interactions portrayed and the messiness of the ending is perhaps the most realistic part of all.
Tuesday, July 07, 2020
A Constellation of Roses, by Miranda Asebedo
She never knew her father and, as far as Trix has known before now, he had no living family. But they exist and they are willing to take her in as long as she agrees to stay out of trouble and finish high school.
The McCabes turn out to be an eccentric matriarchy that run's their small town's pie bakery and tea room. And like Trix, each of them has their own special talent: her great aunt can tell fortunes, her cousin reads people's darkest secrets on touch, and her aunt bakes magical pies that heal emotional wounds.
Trix has lots of wounds to heal. But can she open herself to trust this family she never knew? Or will she fall back into bad habits and return to life on the streets?
It's a familiar story, but well-told this time. The characters are vivid and break free of the usual stereotypes. The writing is beautiful, especially as Asebedo waxes poetically on family and identity. And while everyone seems entirely too forgiving and the hardships a little too easily overcome, it is still an enjoyable and uplifting read.
Sunday, July 05, 2020
Here We Are Now, by Jasmine Warga
The reason is simple enough (his father is dying and he thinks that Tal should meet her grandfather before it is too late) but it leaves her with lots of questions: Why now? And how will his family treat her?
The homecoming is predictably awkward and messy, but Tal is surprised to find how welcome she is and how comfortable she feels with this family that she never knew. And through some pressure, she gets her father and mother to tell the true story of how they met and why they separated and kept her in the dark about her father's identity.
Warga does well-developed characters and good dialogue and that makes this otherwise forgettable story compelling enough to read. Some of the fault lies in Warga's focus on the parents' story. It's interesting but don't get to know Tal and really appreciate how these discoveries help her grow. Her own issues with trust are introduced but not developed. A tangent (a budding romance with a neighbor) that could have tested Tal's trust issues is left hanging.