CeCe lost Ethan. After succumbing to pressure from him to have sex, he decided to break things off. He says he needs to
re-connect with his faith and is going away to Summer Bible camp. CeCe, whose faith in Jesus was never very
strong, is convinced that by following him there and proving she can be a good
Christian too, that she’ll win him back.
Her best friend and neighbor Paul tries to convince her that this is a
very bad idea. When he fails to do
so, he announces that he’ll go too in order to help.
At camp, CeCe is definitely in over her head. Her ideas clash repeatedly with the staff and
the campers, but her biggest shock is finding that Ethan has a girlfriend at camp. Desperate, she gets Paul to
agree to pretend to be her new boyfriend and make Ethan jealous. It works so well that CeCe and Paul discover
they have feelings for each other. It culminates in a stand off at a campfire confessional.
So far, so predictable.
I twitched quite a bit at the depiction of organized Christianity, but
that’s pretty common with writers who want a group that’s still
OK to trash. But the great climactic fireside showdown occurs on page 185 and there
are almost 150 MORE PAGES TO GO!! What
on earth are they going to do with the rest of the book?
The answer is to embark on a treatise about sex and
consent. The girls at the camp, shocked by what CeCe has endured launch into an extended dialogue about sexual mishaps, questions, and consent. Much of it is fine and the material is
sound, but it is so dense that it largely comes across as a textbook.
The book's popularity may be boosted by a pretty explicit sex scene at
the end that the sex education material seems to be building up for. It contains probably the most thorough
by-the-book explicit consensual sexual encounter ever recorded in a YA (or any other)
book. And there is a stress on verbalized consent (i.e., implicit consent does not count so everything must be spoken aloud), which will raise eyebrows. There’s nothing intrinsically
wrong with teaching that good sex is consensual sex, but it has so little to do with the first half of the book that it felt like a hidden agenda.
It’s a little hard to review the book since
it is really two books – one fiction and the other non-fiction.
The characters start
as young people but largely become mouthpieces in the end. CeCe and Paul get the best treatment, but
that’s because they get to be the models for perfect sex. In the first half of the novel, I found them
much more interesting. The end is a mess
as the story shifts in several different directions, but finally gets the kids
back home and into each other’s arms.